Lovers Secrets
Oh you, Shadow in the Corner
with every exhale leaving
a darkness o'er my cavern
it clangs within my breasts.
Your warm, life giving Flow
now spiraling into frigidity,
once brought me to convulsions.
Your Peak...FROZEN
Your Valley...SILENT
Your Curves...UNEXPLORED
Do you tease? Do you jest?
Or simply mock?
It won't be long now
Secret Lover,
before I traverse your every
nook and cranny.
Are you ready for me?
DNKG Lovers Secrets 2014 ©
Oh you, Shadow in the Corner
with every exhale leaving
a darkness o'er my cavern
it clangs within my breasts.
Your warm, life giving Flow
now spiraling into frigidity,
once brought me to convulsions.
Your Peak...FROZEN
Your Valley...SILENT
Your Curves...UNEXPLORED
Do you tease? Do you jest?
Or simply mock?
It won't be long now
Secret Lover,
before I traverse your every
nook and cranny.
Are you ready for me?
DNKG Lovers Secrets 2014 ©
Wow! A very interesting poem to say the least :) I had to read this one over twice. Thank you for sharing. I like it!
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading it. Twice. It catches you by surprise and makes you think like "wait, what did she just say??"
ReplyDeleteGreat poem. It speaks to me right now at this point in my life.
ReplyDeleteThank you Allison. I like that it can be taken in many different directions. Im happy it can speak to you. That makes my day :)
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem. I use to write poems all the time. I need to start writing again. It is a great way to express yourself.
ReplyDeleteJennifer, thank you! I really hope the poem inspires you to find that creative side again. There is no wrong way to express yourself and to feel yourself in that moment. Set yourself free!
DeleteVery nice! I read it over as well. It's lovely, Thank you. Peace.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jeanne.
DeleteWow! My English Composition professor would love this! I love the magic we can spin with words. Even the ancient poets that wrote in Latin... funny how the underlying themes haven't changed much. =) It's been ages since I've written poetry. Blessings~
ReplyDeleteThank you Meredith. I appreciate your honest words. I agree! It is amazing how words from our soul can spark a fire so deep that it can burn within us so powerfully. I feel so grateful to G-d that inspiration literally just "HITS" me and I can't stop from coming out. I always support my fellow bloggers and writers to find their way back to themselves. Sometimes, its nice to get back to our basics of writing. I write a lot of stories myself but when I want to get back to me, Poetry is who I am. I can't wait to read your blog tomorrow Meredith. Your entire story inspires me.
DeleteNice poem! I'm so glad I came by! Lovely blog as well, although I had a bit of a hard time reading it so maybe white text in bold if you ever decide to make a change? The poem is inviting. This blog/journal/book is inviting. I believe I'll stay awhile. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you! I made some changes to the readability and made it more solid since that was also suggested to me by another blog reader. Thank you for your critique and love.
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